Domonick young
Mrs. Lehmann
English 1-3
20 February 2020
A Trip to the Underworld
Not being able to talk to family sucks. It mainly sucks because I died at such an early age. I was only twenty-two at the time. I have been dead for 19 years now. I died because of the doctor said when I was born, I could only live to be ten years old. But somehow, I managed to live to twenty-two. No one knows what dese I had. There have only been ten cases in the hole world. There has been a lot that has changed because I now have a brother and my mom has cancer.
I have been working on finding a cure for this cancer for my mother but the only place I can find this cure is in the underworld. The cure is called “cancer be gone” and the only way to get it is to sacrifice someone in the real world. The only person I could show myself to would be someone in family. I couldn't show myself to my mother because I need to save her. I also couldn't show myself to my father because he died before I was born. And I don’t have any sisters so that leaves only one person my brother.
So, the next day I set off to go find my brother jack. He is only about eleven so he still goes to school so decided to look for jack at his school. I went through the office all the classrooms but I couldn't find him. I even checked my mom's house and he wasn't there. So, I listened to my mom and found out he was with his biological father for the week. The thing is I don’t know where his house is located. I don’t think it could be that far though so I checked about a mile away and couldn't find the home anywhere. Then I thought GOOGLE!! I looked up his name Fred and found out he was a therapist who worked in an office. I gave him a call. The number I can't put for safety reasons. He answered with hello this is Fred from the therapist business how may I help you?
I was just calling to ask u some questions i said
No problem what would they be
So, I asked where is the therapist business located?
he gave me the address. Ok thank you I said with a polite voce as I hung up the phone.
As I was on my way to go to see him, I saw a cat stuck in a tree. There was some teenager who just seemed like he got his first car because he was revving the engine looking for a race. There was a short old man washing his dog in his front yard. I remember seeing before I passed away. He looked about five-foot maybe I little bit taller. He had green eyes one was a little grey like he had been blinded from world war two. I then saw Fred’s office. I maybe waited outside for him for at least an hour before he came out. He was about six foot three looked good in a suit and tie and was pretty wealthy he had what looked to be a mustang gt5000 2018.As he walked to his car, I followed him. The interior was really nice a black leather finish tinted windows and a nitrous tank. About an hour and a half later we made it to his house it was in a nice neighborhood. Jack was sitting on the couch later that night when he was sleeping, I picked him up and headed to the underworld to get the cancer be gone. He woke up about twenty minutes later asking where we were headed so I told him a lie. The park I told him just go back to sleep it will be ok. I think he was still in a sleeping state because he went right back to sleep. About an hour later we were in the underworld. I started to feel nervous for some reason. There was a big hole called sacrifice pit and had a list of all the things u could get after u sacrifice someone. There was the cancer be gone, flying chair and even meet a dead famous person. As I was getting ready to sacrifice Jack, he started to wake up so before he woke up. I threw him in so I didn’t feel so bad when he started to cry.
I got out of the under word feeling really sad but still happy I got the cure. It was in a bottle about six inches. I gave it to my mom and her cancer was gone!
Student’s Choice Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
2. What are you particularly proud of in this paper?
The last part of the story where I talk about the dad and his car.
3. What does this paper show readers about you?
That I am not that good of a righter but I try any ways.
Mrs. Lehmann
English 1-3
20 February 2020
A Trip to the Underworld
Not being able to talk to family sucks. It mainly sucks because I died at such an early age. I was only twenty-two at the time. I have been dead for 19 years now. I died because of the doctor said when I was born, I could only live to be ten years old. But somehow, I managed to live to twenty-two. No one knows what dese I had. There have only been ten cases in the hole world. There has been a lot that has changed because I now have a brother and my mom has cancer.
I have been working on finding a cure for this cancer for my mother but the only place I can find this cure is in the underworld. The cure is called “cancer be gone” and the only way to get it is to sacrifice someone in the real world. The only person I could show myself to would be someone in family. I couldn't show myself to my mother because I need to save her. I also couldn't show myself to my father because he died before I was born. And I don’t have any sisters so that leaves only one person my brother.
So, the next day I set off to go find my brother jack. He is only about eleven so he still goes to school so decided to look for jack at his school. I went through the office all the classrooms but I couldn't find him. I even checked my mom's house and he wasn't there. So, I listened to my mom and found out he was with his biological father for the week. The thing is I don’t know where his house is located. I don’t think it could be that far though so I checked about a mile away and couldn't find the home anywhere. Then I thought GOOGLE!! I looked up his name Fred and found out he was a therapist who worked in an office. I gave him a call. The number I can't put for safety reasons. He answered with hello this is Fred from the therapist business how may I help you?
I was just calling to ask u some questions i said
No problem what would they be
So, I asked where is the therapist business located?
he gave me the address. Ok thank you I said with a polite voce as I hung up the phone.
As I was on my way to go to see him, I saw a cat stuck in a tree. There was some teenager who just seemed like he got his first car because he was revving the engine looking for a race. There was a short old man washing his dog in his front yard. I remember seeing before I passed away. He looked about five-foot maybe I little bit taller. He had green eyes one was a little grey like he had been blinded from world war two. I then saw Fred’s office. I maybe waited outside for him for at least an hour before he came out. He was about six foot three looked good in a suit and tie and was pretty wealthy he had what looked to be a mustang gt5000 2018.As he walked to his car, I followed him. The interior was really nice a black leather finish tinted windows and a nitrous tank. About an hour and a half later we made it to his house it was in a nice neighborhood. Jack was sitting on the couch later that night when he was sleeping, I picked him up and headed to the underworld to get the cancer be gone. He woke up about twenty minutes later asking where we were headed so I told him a lie. The park I told him just go back to sleep it will be ok. I think he was still in a sleeping state because he went right back to sleep. About an hour later we were in the underworld. I started to feel nervous for some reason. There was a big hole called sacrifice pit and had a list of all the things u could get after u sacrifice someone. There was the cancer be gone, flying chair and even meet a dead famous person. As I was getting ready to sacrifice Jack, he started to wake up so before he woke up. I threw him in so I didn’t feel so bad when he started to cry.
I got out of the under word feeling really sad but still happy I got the cure. It was in a bottle about six inches. I gave it to my mom and her cancer was gone!
Student’s Choice Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
- Explain the process you went through to write this paper. Please be specific.
- Is this paper narrative, expository, or argumentative? How do you know?
- Tell me one thing you learned from writing this paper.
2. What are you particularly proud of in this paper?
The last part of the story where I talk about the dad and his car.
3. What does this paper show readers about you?
That I am not that good of a righter but I try any ways.